unexpected

~ ~ floating like a feather ~ ~

      

 

      lines are lengthy,
inside this liquid language.
   -   somewhat unique  -
     
      ( our unknown )
 a mysterious masterpiece
   eager to be,
unveiled and understood.

   ---------------------------
    

falling in love :
         so unexpected
                  
                  ~*~

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ayesha Faiz]

This poem is short but the meaning behind those simple words is deep. The words flow like a mystery and the ending is unexpectedly sweet. Well written Brandy!

[Brandy]

Exactly ! Words create a beautiful moment and mood. It's a wonderful feeling to embrace. I appreciate you and your thoughts, Ayesha. :)

[Trace]

If we could actually understand how falling in love works.
You capture a tiny sample of the incredible emotions that a person has no way of explaining, but know when the feeling courses throughout their heart

[Brandy]

It's a mystery, indeed ! One that's beautiful, magical and inviting, all at the same time. Teasing all the senses. Thank you Trace, for sharing your kind and tender thoughts.

[Levi Levin]

This is very true. I’m waiting on the unexpected 🤣

[Brandy]

Well, the unexpected seems to happen, unexpectedly. : )

Maybe you won't have to wait long.

Thank you Levi, for your kind review.

[Levi Levin]

Your very welcome.

[Ballpark Frank]

I enjoy these words.

'Unveiled and understood'

I like that! All of us writers strive for that after all. It's frustrating when something is unveiled, and then completely misunderstood. 😒

But it's a relief just to be read!

And, I stopped caring about what others think of my reviews. 😉

[Brandy]

Within are thoughts, just waiting to be ' unveiled and understood. ' And . . . in the most beautiful way. : )

Feeling love through words is magical, indeed.

Thank you Franky, for sharing your thoughts upon this little scribble of mine.

Just reach beyond the unreachable. Everything will fall into place for you, when the time is right.

[Relic]

Sometimes the right eye gazing can cause a language all its own. Yes, love can be a spiritual feeling unmatched with the right person. I like your take on it. :)

[Brandy]

So true, Relic. I must say, eye gazing creates a beautiful mood for me. I appreciate your lovely review. :) Thanks for the compliment as well.

[Lorry]

As succinct as I've ever read about love, which as a topic doesn't lend itself to short writes, as we too often get caught up in the prosaic to paint our pictures, so we'll done for putting a limit in place, as I've already said to someone this morning, it is an art in itself to write shorter pieces well.
I think you have achieved that here!

[Brandy]

Smiling at you, Lorry. :) Connecting through words is beautiful, indeed. My poem expresses falling in love in this way.

Thank you for your lovely review. I appreciate the compliment about saying so much in just a few words. :)

[Lorry]

You're weclome.... I mean welcome....damn predunctive toast...I mean predictive text! 😃

[Brandy]

I'm smiling and blushing, all at the same time. 😊

[Lorry]

Which proves, I've still got it!
It may be contagious though, so you best type any future replies with gloves and a mask on. 😃

[Brandy]

Indeed, you do. : )
Of, course ! Thanks for making sure I'm be very careful. I might take a chance though, and just wear the gloves. : )

[Dave W.]

Love can be great, and it can be cruel, this two-edged sword, this dangerous fire.... also I like that you are saying so much by saying so little....

[Brandy]

Dave, I appreciate you and your heartfelt review.

Many emotions tangle around love, and you're right about it being great, yet dangerous at the same time.

Falling in love is the best feeling ever. : )
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here on this little scribble of mine.

Oh, Sometimes less is more. : )