golden echo

~ keeping in mind when life felt calm ~ the pace, slow and steady

- like traveling back in time,
       to 
            a
         season
   of   vivid   colors, 
         
  the aroma of autumn. 
            
     thoughts reflect
          laughter,
   as leaves    crumble
beneath   t i n y   feet.
        
              the  
  ( simple moments )
           of life.
        
         each one
            being,
               a 
            gentle 
        reminder of
              
          - p u r e -
          innocence.
  

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Such simple and beautiful reflections on my favorite season!!!! I love every word, well done!
Warmly, B

[Brandy]

Thank you, Betty. So vibrant and festive are moments this time of year. Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts are appreciated. : ) Hugs, Brandy

[Snow_]

I would always do haiku. one a day at time no good more so bias super bias. for phillipine culture day? we have days always us okay? are you okay?

I love your poems its a nice read makes me laugh only that its too simple no something must be done you''re a female this is a lovely peom if im a female too lovely...'topic no one talks about is not me? nor rules is also me okay? admitting my grammar a day.

[Brandy]

I'm doing well. Life keeps me busy, but being busy is a good thing. : )

I haven't written a haiku in such a long time. While most of my poems are less and not more, I do enjoy the balance between them.

I appreciate your thoughts. : )

[Broken Soul]

I really like the emphasis of tiny. It reminds me of children being happy with the simplest of things, something as small as jumping on a leaf just for that crunch. Thanks for sharing.

[Brandy]

The world is BIG, so reflecting on simple moments through the word ' t i n y, ' in this way, helped to embrace that feeling even more. I appreciate you noticing and for all your kind words. : )

And jumping in leaves is so much fun. Crumble and Crunch.

[Trace]

I love poetry about the seasons, l cant decide if spring or Autumn is my favorite, they both have so many things to highten the senses.
This is a very nice reminder of why l like Autumn.

Trace

[Brandy]

There's something poetic about the seasons. I'll wait and post my scribble about the sand and sandals, the next time Summer arrives. I love both. Spring reminds me of love in bloom and Autumn whispers warmth and beautiful colors. Your kind words are appreciated, Trace. :) Brandy

[Lorry]

Ahh, I remember back in the day before everything turned black and white, those golden shades that shocked the already startled by the cold crisp shock of breathing out of your lungs that bit quicker.
I remember the only sound was underfoot, as you scrunched through the leaves, before rain turned them reminiscent of soggy cornflakes left in the bowl.
Good to see you scribbling again. 😀

[Brandy]

It seems like a long time ago, when life felt calm and the pace was more like a soft walk. I wanted to reflect back to simpler times. One without social media. The sound of leaves crunching beneath your feet is poetic indeed. I think some may do that, but, not like before. Your thoughts are always appreciated, Lorry.

I'm back- but- between moments. :)

[Chris Shaw]

This poem stimulates the senses. The colours, smells and sounds of autumn. I liked the crumble of leaves. Your words had a calming effect on this reader and I loved your posted image Brandy. Nicely penned work.

Chris

[Brandy]

Autumn is a lovely season. I wanted to embrace the beautiful colors, the aroma and these simple moments. Life is precious and so are tender memories. Thank you, Chris. Your lovely comment brings a smile. :) Brandy