insatiable

 

your warm

makes me weak

all through my legs

cant think straight

i moan instead

my body you've fed

 

your warm

pierces my deep

undiscovered lands

a spiritual journey

like praying and

joining hands

 

your warm

pulsates through fingertips

drumming love against my flesh

my paradigm shifts

carnal becomes less

our souls mesh

 

enough will never be

your warm

leaves me

insatiable

Reviews

[Kat Williams]

I can say with all honesty I got wet and mushy...your warm..awesome phrasing. I'm going to steal it..lol

[Sarah]

Loved this! :) Very sweet & erotic. ;o Great use of description and the short lines worked really well. ^_^