i kissed new lips

thoughts brought on by hurt

i dreamed i kissed new lips

and they were sweet like acceptance

the sting of sharp disdain

did not linger once the kiss was done

 

what's done looms large

above me when i lay at night

restless i am

with only the reverberating rejection

of me, myself and i

to lull me asleep

a sleep i cannot reach

 

i dream awake

the chaos we've seemed to create

our perfect little hell

that we keep so well

i no longer want

 

she 

use to love me

she truly did

 

Reviews

[perfectlymetiKulous]

This was articulate and extraordinary... very moving, succinct but certainly not simple. The emotions were concisely woven into your words, just a lovely piece. I know exactly where you're coming from; it's almost as if you've come into my heart and realized what I'm feeling. It takes a true talent to be able to connect with their reader on such a level. Beautifully done. :)

[Legion]

Sometime the dream is better than the reality. A wonderful write though. Two hooves up. Kudos.