Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Bear Y'hoshua H.
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Just the way it is Mental Wars poetry

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Living life

Trying to please

Everyone else

And forgetting me

Giving every bit

Of myself

To others

Until I’m drowning

Further

Further

Further down

I go

Is there a bottom?

When does this end?

Sinking in tears

I’m crying

And crying

Crying myself to sleep

Because I am never good enough

Never enough

Never close

To making them all

Happy

 

© 2024 Bear Y'hoshua H.


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A suffocating poem. Beautifully written

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on August 3, 2024
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Bear Y'hoshua H.
Bear Y'hoshua H.

Dayton, OH



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