A note from my guilt

Why do you come to me?

Why not the criminals

 

Why do you follow me with your friend fear?

Why do you make me cry so many tears?

 

Pleas tell me what makes me bad?

What makes you get so mad?

Leave me alone

I need to be on my own

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Love the title... And the thoughts that flow out of it...
Thanks for sharing
Arwa

Sounds like something from a controlled relationship. For a poem it carries a lot of details- Very nice :)

[Helpless]

amazing writing, very well done

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome work and excellent title.

[DontBlink158]

Great Job! I think we all wonder this from time to time... It was a great write!

[Bailey C. Writing]

Pleas tell me what makes me bad?
*Please tell me what makes me so bad.
It wasn't asking a question ;3
Why not the criminals
*Why not the criminals?
Though that one was asking a question :P
Just a typo or two :) Anyways. For a short poem like this, you have to express everything well and make it flow, and make it a good poem.
Which you've done :)
It was an interesting poem that I enjoyed reading...

[Samantha Heaton]

Liked this alot good write

[Brytt]

line two needs a ?
line five: Please, change ? to .

Again, I love the hanging sentence at the end! ^^