Crying

it can come when you least expect

it can be such a beast

but it's very hard to stop

especially when it happens a lot

 

it can come when your sad, angry

or up in your room

it can come in the shower

when it's hot

or when it's cold

even when your realy old

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I have a problem with men thinking it is somewhat disgraceful to cry For me it is a stronger man who touches upon his own humanity and cries for it

[Muse]

Crying does not discriminate...and cares not if the time is not right. And once it starts to pour...it fills our very core.

[Katannaism]

Very straightforward and simple that suits the relatively short length well. Nice job. Keep up the good work yeah? ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Our emotions are hard to predict, and at times, come out of nowhere... I love your expression of this very true piece. Nicely done!

[Leslie Philibert]

I love it ! A real honest, clever poem.Like all good poems I get the feeling I understand how you are.Keep writing, you have lots to offer.

[Leon R]

absolutely true. and you have awesome style and perfect way to put it.

[TheFemininePad]

A great poem that demonstrates a very valid point. Crying can happen when we are sad or happy. It can even occur when we are angry. I know a few people that cry when they are very angry. It's true that it can occur at anytime.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

SO TRUE!

[Brytt]

too true.

[Hello, Goodbye]

..that foul condition that haunts us and makes vulnerable fools of us.. the wounds are in our souls and the bleeding, tears of melancholy.. .