Illusions Over Infatuation

I'm not sure why i wrote this I just did.

As you pull me close

& look me in the eyes,

I feel the tension

I feel the vibe.

 

My heart beat speeds up

As you slowly kiss me,

You make me feel wanted,

As if you want to see,

Inside my heart.

 

Your kisses become a more intense flow of emotions,

I finally know exactly how you feel.

I finally know,

This is the real deal.

 

As you pick me up

I realize,

I'm falling in love,

Looking in your eyes.

 

We lay here holding hands

Under this night sky,

You whisper to me,

"For you I would die".

 

The alarm goes off,

It was all in my head.

I start to cry,

As I lay in this empty bed.

 

Why can't you really feel that way?

Am I not good enough?

Why  is it so impossible

For us to really fall in love?

Why are all these people

holding us apart?

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow!! One of the msot romantic pieces I've read today. The ending was quite unsual because I was expecting a happy endling. But it makes your poem different and all the more interesting. It has a mesmerizing flow. It really spreads itself into the reader's mind and it can't think of anything else. All the time I was reading this, I could easily visualize it as if I was seeing a romantic movie...lol
This one's really good!! Well Done!!...keep writing ^_^

[Reborn A Phoenix]

i love it...it rocks big time

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

surprise endings. those are always the best.
i like it.

[kitty_kelley]

Beck, I like this alot... I like that you keep writing about different parts of a relationship that isn't. This is a good work, but could you do me a favor and put a question mark on the end of the last sentence? It's killing my OCD hehehe ^_^