Just A Little Somethin

Those of you who know me well & are trust worthy know who this is about ,those of you who don't know me well....it's about no one.

I don't know what to think of you,

You're such a mystery to me.

I don't know what to say to you,

To make you want me.

 

So tell me who you are,

So I can find the words to say.

Tell me who you are,

So I don't feel so weird this way.

 

I've known you for awhile now,

But still I don't know you.

I've known you for awhile now,

Still I don't know what to do.

Reviews

[Lyndsay Castro]

Okay, I guess I don't know you well enough, but I still really liked it! Readers don't need to know the exact subject or person you're refering to, as long as they feel connected with it in their own way. And that's how I feel about it. And my opion matters. ;p

[Mr. Lopez]

Your poem voices the nature of humans to play the lead role in their own play. Actors tying to impress but too afraid to show themsleves in fear that they might not be accepted for whom they really are. Getting past the mask can be challenging for sure but once seen most will find themselves well accepted. Interesting poem .

Mr. Lopez

[kitty_kelley]

I like this Beck, and just so you know.... It's not completly your fault.... He's just really shy when it comes to girls.

[John Stussy]

Well, if you don't really know him, try to get to know him. He might be what you're looking for, he might be something completely different. Try it and find out, it might work out. You never know, he might be waiting for you to approach him.