Please Keep Loving Me

I was washing dishes & I started randomly singing & the beggining of this is what came out,The rest was added when i started typing.

Trust me

Even though I lied.

You'll see

I never meant to hurt you

When I said goodbye.

 

Baby you have to see I love you.

I'm not lying now.

What I'm saying is true.

I want to get you back but how?

 

Just let me hold you tonight

Until you understand

Until I make it right.

Please just take my hand.

 

I would swim the seven seas if I had too.

I would make you a medicine to make you feel brand new.

I would say it million times so you could know it's true,

Baby I love you.

 

So here we are again,

Do you still love me?

"Yes I do" is what you say you feel within.

Now I think you see,

We are meant to be.

 

I wanted to hold you.

Now you're holding me tight.

We're laying under the stars

This feels so right.

Don't let me go.

Can I stay with you tonight.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer,
This may not be "great" because I wrote it in 7 mins.

Reviews

[Reborn A Phoenix]

for it being wrote in 7mins it is alsome.

[The_emo_kid]

I thought it was amazing.

[Morgan]

Love it!!!!!

[Lady Lazarus.]

Just let me hold you tonight
Until you understand
Until I make it right.
Please just take my hand.


Is really incredibly romantic.
You're an amazing writer and convey so many emotions in a few lines...
I love it

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

All your stuff is starting to sound the same.
I hate being mean to you, you sound like a sweet girl, but I'm not going to sugar coat it.

Try not writing it in 7 minutes. Think about it. Rewrite it. Think of better ways to say stuff instead of just repeating whats constantly replayed on the radio.

[Sarah]

It's a cute, simple love poem that captures the more innocent longing and infatuation. Nice job. ^_^

[Lyndsay Castro]

Well it's fantastic for seven minutes! You did a great job, you make is feel both sides of the story, which is unusual.

[SamBug]

I liked it. Great right. Keep writing. Good job

[Mr. Lopez]

I agree with C. Froman, This poem is tender. Thats the best way that i can discribe how it left me feeling. I believe that this would fit well with a musical rythme to it . It can be hard to deal with the decisions of the past. Especially when it comes to matters of the heart. Loving, lonely, desperate longing for......many mixed emotions stirred by your piece. Great Job.

Mr. Lopez

[Tomás Ó C..]

Do you have a style of music in mind for this?