Please Keep Loving Me

I was washing dishes & I started randomly singing & the beggining of this is what came out,The rest was added when i started typing.

Trust me

Even though I lied.

You'll see

I never meant to hurt you

When I said goodbye.

 

Baby you have to see I love you.

I'm not lying now.

What I'm saying is true.

I want to get you back but how?

 

Just let me hold you tonight

Until you understand

Until I make it right.

Please just take my hand.

 

I would swim the seven seas if I had too.

I would make you a medicine to make you feel brand new.

I would say it million times so you could know it's true,

Baby I love you.

 

So here we are again,

Do you still love me?

"Yes I do" is what you say you feel within.

Now I think you see,

We are meant to be.

 

I wanted to hold you.

Now you're holding me tight.

We're laying under the stars

This feels so right.

Don't let me go.

Can I stay with you tonight.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer,
This may not be "great" because I wrote it in 7 mins.

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Wonderfully written true love here. Great job, definitely worth my time. Don't change it at all, sometimes pieces written as quickly as this are great as is.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a tender, loving piece (and so lyrical)... You capture the strength and passion of true love, and the desire to make it last forever. Beautiful!

Craig