I Won't Let You

I feel kind of strong today!

I know you'll try to break me in the end

but I won't let you.

 

I know you'll try to fool me in the end

but I won't let you.

 

I know at the end of this road

you'll try to throw me over the edge

but I won't let you

& if you think you'll get the best of me again

you're mistaken.

 

I know the flame will rise higher,

It has to get worse before it gets better

but you'll never make me look bad,

I won't let you.

 

Trust in what I say,

I trick you not.

Author's Note

Nothing is perfect,Don't be too harsh please!!

Reviews

[Lyndsay Castro]

I like this. You are strong, and this definitely shows off your determination.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

thats right stand up for yourself... your nobodies fool... love the power and inner strength in your words. Very nicely done.

[An owl on the moon]

I love your words, so full of confidence and strength! To know that life will not be easy, that people will try and bring you down, but you will face it and rise above it... So powerful!

Craig

[Sarah]

Very powerful - your confidence & desire to overcome is evident in this piece. I particularly loved the lines: "I know the flame with rise higher, / It has to get worse before it gets better" This has a lovely ring to it.^^ Nice job. :)