5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Second by second,

Here it comes.

 

Countdown to...

I don't know,

Here we go

now!!

 

Tic Toc Tic Toc

minute by minute.

 

Countdown to the where and the when,

To the lust and the sin.

To the what have I done

and the where have I been.

 

Countdown,

5, 4, 3, 2, 1....

We're still

not done.

Author's Note

Ok this one is very random & kind of pointless but I really like it!! Please don't be too harsh!! This on was just for fun!!

Reviews

[Adeline]

I love this! I love nonsensical stuff that DOESN'T need analyzing. I hate analyzing, it takes the pleasure out fo reading something.

[Mr. Lopez]

This is more then just fun , its very insightful. the third stanza....

Countdown to the where and the when,

To the lust and the sin.

To the what have I done

and the where have I been.


...was my favorite. Very cool !!

Mr.Lopez

[An owl on the moon]

A beautiful balance of playfulness and depth! Wonderfully done!!!

Craig

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so cool... sometimes we just bid our time between the good things in life and await the next adventure... a very fun write.