Nature walk

This poem is about a nature walk with a deeper meaning.

Winter so late leaving
Autumns hanging on
Leaves stuck to my shoes
As i travel to a destination
I dont know where it is
Or how to get there
But this nature walk is bringing me along a path
I shall not go astray
Step by step
Im getting closer
Im also getting farther
Where is this leading me?

Reviews

[Johanna]

Cute :) I liked reading this, had a little easy spark to it, fresh :) Nice, good job!

[beckyflowa]

:)thank you very much Johanna

[zainul]

May be it leads you to a bliss.
Nice work.
Enjoyed reading.

[beckyflowa]

:)thank you very much

[zainul]

:)You are most wecome

[Christoph]

Obviously I have no idea what this means for you, but what's great about it is that you very well capture the moment. I sure the hell know what it meant to me when twice in my life I went for that walk.

[beckyflowa]

i apologize, i am only seeing these reviews now haha
thank you very much and i think everyone has been on that walk at least once in their life.