life goes on

life goes on

A Poem by beckyflowa

while you're unsure,
the leaves fall
while you cry,
rocks erode
while you grieve,
the earth spins

© 2015 beckyflowa


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good comparison, the way you wove the individual into the collective that is nature was very good short and sweet, only I would have liked to see more.

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Added on January 17, 2015
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beckyflowa
beckyflowa

dublin, Ireland



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hello i'm becky, i use this website as mainly a store for poems i write but please do take a look and review them, feedback would be nice:) also if you have any tips on poem or short story writing, .. more..