Vacant space

Often times
I wonder
I ponder
I explore
But never leaving my seat

Often times
I create,
initiate
I make
But it never leaves the front door

Often times
I hope
I slope
I cry
But I never get the help

Often times
I stay
I grey
I wither
But never show my mold

To others I'm vibrant
To others I'm clear
To others I'm happy
But to me I'm not here

Reviews

[Saul IQM]

Very succinct and self-exploring. I really enjoyed the structure and the specific word-choice you embraced to convey such a specific feeling. I think the use of a bit more complex phrases would more accurately capture the magnitude of the feeling you are referring to, yet that is more of a personal preference. Overall a great and thoroughly expressive poem.

[beckyflowa]

Thank you for reading. I completely agree, my poetry could definitely improve!

[emipoemi]

I can't get over how good this is! Wods can't simply describe it. Especially the final two stanzas! O - M - freaking - G! Way - to - Go! Very much enjoyed every aspect of this! Well done!