One Way Love

one may love another, but receive no emotions back...

One may love another,

Back receive no emotions back.

One's heart can be stored in a bag,

But their heart's crush in another sack.

One may try impressions,

Though the other seem to have no heart.

Both might say yes or no,

'Cause love's a work of art...

                           beefjerky 

Author's Note

again, probanly not best romance writer here! just turned 12...

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

Aww sweetie, you are 12? Well, first of all you have so much talent! I think you have a bright future ahead if you continue writing. This poem was loving and a bit tragic. Other than spelling errors, you did an excellent job. Never stop writing sweet heart. Kudos.