The Invisible

A portrayal of a character, one who is shy, one who fears being in public, one who wants to exist invisibly, alone with his own-self as what the world gave him, was too harsh for him to bear.

The Invisible

I walk alone in the shades

and hide myself from being seen,

with time my identity fades 

and i begin to exist unseen 

I share thoughts with the silence

prevailing ion the deep darks of night,

i live my life in past's remembrance

the time when life was quiet right

I wander in the lonely boulevards

reflecting on what i left behind,

collecting the pieces of shattered shards

of my broken soul and the essence of my mind

I encounter fear and feel the threats

of the unknown and shallow emptiness,

sinking in the sea of guilt and regrets

like living a life, a life so lifeless

Author's Note

Thoughts again, reflected back in words. This is not me..

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Much Creativity and Imaginary here.



Thank you for sharing this Creative and Imaginative piece.

nicely penned here.


I walk alone in the shades

and hide myself from being seen,

with time my identity fades

and I begin to exist unseen



Make sure your I's are Cap locked
but no Apologizes this is a Wonderful piece.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[yash]

Glad you pointed it out, thanks for the correction, i 'll immediately put it into action. It feels good to hear words of appreciation. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Bowers]

wow... this was very creatively deep... such emotion was portrayed, a great feeling was brought out with every word. your color choice was fun, and added to the creativity. great write!

[yash]

Thanks, it feels good to hear such words for your work..

[lovergirl]

even though that's not you in the poem you shared so many feelings and made it alive , i loved this piece a lot so meaningful and touching besides that is imaginary-true (hope you understand what i want to mean) ;)

[yash]

Even though this is not me in this poem, i still can feel all those emotions and emulate them as well, as you can read. You know what, it's good to appreciate, but it's better to criticize.

[lovergirl]

and i appreciated your talent of living a characters and feeling its emotions

[yash]

that's my pleasure.