Shades of squalls

Shades of squalls

A Poem by Graybeard
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Watching a storm in the Indian Ocean

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bottle green glass wave
azure deep, white tipped beneath
slate skies, shades of squalls

© 2008 Graybeard


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Through color you brought motion, sound and smell of the storm at sea.

Posted 17 Years Ago
this is very nice, althought i don't particularly like haiku's so i guess this is potentially great. :-)

Posted 17 Years Ago

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 Added on May 27, 2008

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Graybeard
Graybeard

Evansville, IN



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