Between Winters

Haiku Series - Between Winters

 

Between Winters

 

Gambling lambs fly

Springing, sprightly, spirits high

Spring brings earth alive.

 

Woodbine trumpets ring

Salute a summer’s passing

Fanfare in silence.

 

Geese in formation

Homeward, hoot in elation

Slice the autumn sky.

Reviews

[Moonie]

This sounds very original and honest. I love the aliterations, and I have to salute your wit. Excellent!

[Relic]

I can't say I've ever heard of Gambling Lambs before. ha I like each one. Your sense of meter and alliteration stand out and make each one like an easy song to listen to. Great stuff.

[Jo]

Thanks for that. I should, of course, have written 'gambolling lambs'.

[Relic]

No problem.

[NA]

Beautifully done...really enjoyed :) x

[Angi]

Jo, this is a beautifully done sequence. The title is perfect and the imagery is wonderful. Nicely done! Angi~

[SyberRose]

Beautiful and creative Haiku series Jo...Enjoyed...Rose

[Jo]

Many thanks Rose.

[bobc]

Jo...this is wonderful. There are times when I come across something I wish I'd written. This is one of them. Thanx so much and keep at it...bob

[Jo]

Thanks Bob, I really appreciate that.