My life

A poem about my life joking

My life is a closed book

Every chapter has a lock head

That is never opened

My past is a rambled shackle

Full of broken Ming vessels

And fallen roses

My future is a crooked route

In shades of grey and gold

That is all mixed

My path is a two way road

With stops at every junction

And one in every mile

My career is a confused state

With raging civil wars and fraternities

Full of boldness and feebleness

My vision is a world

With raging battles and utopias

Peace mingled with conflict

Yet my life remains

An ephigy of  protogiality

A spring blooming aperture

An ivory tower

A source of continuous regimentation

Full of battle lined men

Full of scientist, philosophers

Full of Utopian pictures

And paintings of the future

As seen by a sovereign

Such is my life     

Author's Note

wrote it in a hurry mistakes might be present

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Maybe written in a hurry. You left the reader with something to think about.
"Yet my life remains
An ephigy of protogiality
A spring blooming aperture
An ivory tower
A source of continuous regimentation"
I believe a good life is trying and making mistakes. A wise person tried not the to repeat them. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Benson Osuji]

thank you for all your reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Exceptional poetry....I thoroughly enjoyed reading every line!

[Amy R]

well this is just amazing!
i was quite amazed by the way u wrote this!
great job.

[Benson Osuji]

thanks I appreciate it

[Amy R]

my pleasure.

[Girl With A Pen]

Wow...I am simply blown away

[hanir]

A marvelous life...
A marvelous write!!
Keep writing. 😊

[Benson Osuji]

Thanks a lot I sincerely appreciate it

[Cody]

Extremely impressive. Seems like the high quality material I'd read from a poem book.

[Benson Osuji]

Thanks Cody it means a lot to me