my own path, my own truth

Keith left the site, and this is for everyone who speaks bravely like him.

I believe that people exist with their values

I am not a slave to my ideas,

I am their owner 

 That is why they can change 

 But values ​​determine my colors 

 If I am too afraid to stand behind them, I do not trust myself. 

 Not everyone will walk the same path as me 

 We will not wear the same colors with all my loved ones 

 We will all carry different shells of different ideologies 

 and this is how our world will be enriched 

 There will be fractures where fear and insecurity shine 

 And our paths will diverge 

 I will exist with my values.

 I will believe that goodness can grow a flower 

 And that I cannot be the best in every story. 

 There were times when i cursed the boys I used to kiss, with the same mouth. 

 There were times when I cried and begged at the gravestones, 

 and there were times when I came back saying "there is nothing here"

 At the end of the day, I always stayed with myself. 

 Because no one else combed my hair as much as I did 

 No one loves all my favorite songs.

No one knows me better than I do 

 And I'm here with my own book and pen 

Whether it works or not 

 I don't want to hide from the sun in the shadow of someone else's courage, 

 I'm going to go out into the sun.

 Whether you come or not

Reviews

[Alice Mayes]

Beren, your poem "My own path, my own truth" is a beautiful meditation on personal growth, individuality, and the courage to stand by one's own beliefs. The metaphor of colors and paths illustrates the diversity of human experience and the importance of authenticity. The acknowledgment of fear and insecurity, and the acceptance of divergence, adds a layer of depth to the narrative of self-discovery.

The lines about past loves and personal growth are particularly poignant, reflecting on the bitterness that can accompany change and the ultimate strength found within oneself. The assertion of independence and the desire to face the sun without the shadow of another's courage is inspiring. It's a powerful declaration of self-love and self-reliance.

Keep up your amazing work, your writings are truly a pleasure to read. :)

[Beren]

You are one of a kind. First, i am grateful FOR you; second, I am grateful TO you.
Your words and yourself will always be welcome here. thank you thank you THANK YOU❤️‍🩹

[Alice Mayes]

Of course, Beren! Your works are always beautiful, and I look forward to each one to come. :D

[Arundass TP]

A powerful poem. Each line is so powerful as it gives something to the reader. Great

[Beren]

Wow thank you so much sir!

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊

[Dylan Macadham]

"To thine own self be true." 'Hamlet'
You and Shakespeare are on the same path :)
Good Write Beren!

[Beren]

Today I just bought a new Shakespeare book! That must be a sign, right? Thank you🌸

[Dylan Macadham]

Haha, yes a Sign :)

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. It feels powerful and alive. You are a philosopher here. Excellent.

[Beren]

Ah thank you so much sir, i appreciate it🌸

[redd Brick Keshner]

A powerful declarative statement of self and being🙏🏻🕊️

[Beren]

Thank you so much🌸

[redd Brick Keshner]

You are most welcome 🙏🏻🕊

[Everett Dulin]

Dancing to your own song is always amazing, once I really figured it out life gets so much better.

[Beren]

I hope you always have the best tunes.🌸

[keith]

that dear friend is why
i piss in the ocean because i kan
not because it's kool

YOU! got it goin ON GIRL!
p.s. certainly appreciate we are mostly on the same page hahahahaHA!

[Beren]

You are an absolute idol for me, you don't afraid to speak like the others. To be honest, I inspired you while writing this.
I really appreciate you sir!

[Inkspire]

"I am not a slave to my ideas,
I am their owner
That is why they can change "
Loved those lines.

[Beren]

Actually I inspired them from a book, a famous one. But i couldn’t find the writer back :( so I just used here again. Thank you for reading

[Renata]

I like your words and your philosophy, Beren. We are taught values by our parents and we incorporate additional ones as we experience life. They shape the person we become and choose to be. I think staying true to our values and true to ourselves is the only way to live in personal harmony. The strength in your words finely illustrates the character you possess. Always be yourself.

[Beren]

I think the first time when you disagree with your parents, it feels super uncomfortable but makes you grow. I don't know how we our ideas and values are sharping but I find myself in them.
Your thoughts are matter, thank you so so much!

[MCS]

I liked how these lines picked up momentum as I read them. This poem also reminded me of something I read a few days ago. This line from The Enchiridion by Epictetus has always stuck with me: “Don't explain your philosophy. Embody it.” Your poem reminded me of it.

[Beren]

A great quote. I'll think about quote for a while, such an honor for me! Thank you for visiting so much!