A TWINKLING EYE

this is to a close friend (older) of mine that just passed and we always teased about her wrinkles. I told her she will always be beautiful

She looks in the mirror
And what does she see?
Wrinkles oh my
Can this be me?

She looks in the mirror
And what does she see?
A twinkling eye
Ahh yes, this is me.

Yes the wrinkles will come
and the hair will go
But as long as she twinkles
she's young, you know.

BIIKAY-

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. The poem is true. We may get old. But the twinkle in our eyes and laughter we can hold on to. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BIIKAY]

I really like how this one turned out. thanks so much for the kind words mr. coyote

[puch]

like like like..this is a poem everyone could relate...

[BIIKAY]

awweeeyy thank youuu!!!

[puch]

you're welcome

[Sirius King]

like ;-)

[BIIKAY]

awey muwah!

[Sirius King]

lol

[EMF]

Not just women will love this. It is bright, fun and funny. An afformation of yourth of mind, irrespective of the body's wear and tear. I loved it. And it applies to fella's too.

[BIIKAY]

good point EMF not once did the thought of this applying to a guy cross my mind....

[Jolie Blossom]

This is so sweet, I think a lot of women would love this. :-)

[BIIKAY]

aww jolz thanks! i really adored angie so this poem is deticated to her she was a very sweet older lady who im sure is a twinling star in the sky now

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Us old chick thnk you too!

[BIIKAY]

lol!!! ur not ollddddd

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Well I think you are now my best friend! Afraid I am but I am cool with it. Wrinkles come with wisdom and wisdom is very cool. My 13 yr old doesn't think so but... Well 13! Hullo!

[BIIKAY]

LOL!!! alright well hello their best friend haaa but hey i think beauty shines from the heart more then the skin so if u have wrinkles dont worry bc beauty is from your heart

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

:)

[MoriartyMesa]

My brain went to something that I want to say is punk, but kick a*s girl punk. Like AC/DSHE or maybe a bit of Johny Rotten.


Nice.

[BIIKAY]

AWWWW THANK YOUUUUU!

[MoriartyMesa]

I apologize, but these were my best musical combo's
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[BIIKAY]

ill check em out!!!

[Hester Vane]

This is very sweet. It reminds me of my mom! Nice structure and rhythm too!

[BIIKAY]

thank youuuuuuu!!! i love writing things everyone can relate to :)

[Geraldine]

I loved this. Simple yet so sweet. :D I enjoyed reading this.

[BIIKAY]

Thanks John for you encouraging support!! I just thought I would join this forum for fun but Im starting to realize its kind of like a free therapy for myself right now ;)