THE MEASURE OF PAIN

Just thinkn...interesting how pain is so power full yet invisible...

The measure of pain is so insane

No matter what you tell your brain

The amount of pain is still the same

It can bleed slow through every vein

Or exit fast like a traveling train

Is there a reason for pain?

I wish I could beat it with a cane

If only it could be washed away by the rain

It never goes away, like a permanent marker stain

What is there to gain going through so much pain

I guess i'll stop trying to figure out the measure of pain

because it will just drive me insane

 

BIIKAY-

Reviews

[Pax]

i really like the choice of words that rhymes perfectly in the end.
this made me think of pain, yes we cannot touch it because we feel it,
but we can measure it by how long it lasts. Pain is always there
its part of our everyday struggles.
great thoughts!

[BIIKAY]

ooooo I like your thinking! -but we can measure it by how long it lasts. very nice insight :))

[Pax]

Your welcome.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very true and very interesting way of putting it forth. Liked it very much

[Stanley Wilson]

good rhymes enjoyed it

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice rhymes. Good job!

[Priscilla Sayers]

There is no measurement for one's pain dear poet. It can get so deep your bones ache, or so intense that your soul grows weary... Very nice work. Thought provoking!

[BIIKAY]

aww thanks for ur wonderful insight!!

[Jolie Blossom]

Love it!! Every line was awesome :) I'm gonna nickname ya biikay rhymes like busts rhymes hahaha :) 100!!

[Broken Soul]

I liked how you made all of the last words of your lines rhyme. It makes reading the poem a bit faster. Nice work.

[BIIKAY]

YAY! glad you liked it...I read some poems and I honestly get lost..like totally confused,,,so i try to keep my poems very simple and easy to understand ;P