BOY OH BOY

You try to watch professionally

Close your eyes

So many voices hypnotize

Calming, soothing,

Enticing, exciting

Anxiety rising

Breaths shallow

Breasts seething

Heart pounding

Stop breathing . . .

"I want to f**k you."

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Boy oh boy indeed...;)

This is a short, yet impactful poem about heightened emotions....you do a good job of intriguing the reader.....and then you deliver the final "killer line"......

Nice work here Eternity......

BB73

[ETERNITY]

BB73, It was difficult to write because the emotion and excitement are so much more. The final line is true. It's a book reading. Oh my. It's awesome. Thanks for the review ;)