Write To My Lover

Write To My Lover

A Poem by ETERNITY
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He's a narrator, a reader of books. We've never met but I have a huge crush. Here's what I'd say:

"
Hi lover, here is my open book life
You know I have a twin, Dessi
You know our parents abandoned us
What else can I write?
.
Do you want to hear about our dancing?
I could have sworn I saw your face
Nobody in the universe is like you
I know I could have anyone but I fancy you
.
You are some days as calm as a judge
Although I know you are just the opposite
Which Mel Blanc character arrived on a storm?
That's who you are but i'd never hold a grudge
I want more ...more ... MORE



© 2026 ETERNITY


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Nice work here Eternity....

This reads kinda like a diary entry, which we are allowed access to....
It flows well, and has a slightly humorous edge to it, like most of your poetry, which is why I like reading your work....

Then the final line which leaves the reader in no doubt as to your desire....

BB73

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

4 Days Ago

BB73, The More More More comes from this friend's book where a psychopath killer wants to kill "more.. read more



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Nice work here Eternity....

This reads kinda like a diary entry, which we are allowed access to....
It flows well, and has a slightly humorous edge to it, like most of your poetry, which is why I like reading your work....

Then the final line which leaves the reader in no doubt as to your desire....

BB73

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

4 Days Ago

BB73, The More More More comes from this friend's book where a psychopath killer wants to kill "more.. read more
Post script: This song is in Aunty's archives But the lyrics are timeless.

Posted 5 Days Ago



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Added on April 6, 2026
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My character's real name is Eternity Rochelle Hart. I am a throwaway kid. Well, not a kid anymore but initially was dumped by Julian on the steps of WritersCafe.org. I learned to survive and fend for .. more..