With so few words you tell such a big story. You have left room for readers to bring their own experiences to bear, to form individual interpretations. I like it.
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Michael Sun Bear, I like to send smoke signals to see what you might make of it. Thanks for reading .. read moreMichael Sun Bear, I like to send smoke signals to see what you might make of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing me.
Short, piercing, and honest—this lands like a question that refuses easy comfort.
The grit is in the confusion itself: love felt deeply, but not yet understood.
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23 Hours Ago
It's frustrating when you know it's what turns them on but OMG so many complications... I read stuff.. read moreIt's frustrating when you know it's what turns them on but OMG so many complications... I read stuff that inspired me. Even seeing golf swings sometimes inspires me ;) That dude is hot! And sometimes he's cold...lol. (in the 60s here)
My character's real name is Eternity Rochelle Hart. I am a throwaway kid. Well, not a kid anymore but initially was dumped by Julian on the steps of WritersCafe.org. I learned to survive and fend for .. more..