Wow this had a grate little cadence to it, almost mother goose rhythm. and the subject matter was delicately approached with the poem but still began and ended in the solid punch you need to get the point across. Loved it.
The poem is amazing. The flow and movement of the words create a vision. Each short line making the poem stronger till the very good ending. A fun poem to read a loud. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
I am Alice through the looking glass...I mix my metaphors with barbiturates. I take my mania with a glass of milk and I rarely look before crossing the street. Walk a mile in my mary janes, friend.
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