Recollect

Acrostic

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RECOLLECT

 

 

 

Recollect the past passage of time went in your life,

Everything which was good or bad but by you it was left behind.

Crave for an eternal loss and extreme longing,

Once open your eyes for the past and not for a new morning.

Loose yourself in your own opaque vision,

Loneliness if you remember had never ever given you an illusion.

Ever since your heart had heard of the words which were never spoken,

Create a distant place to keep a feel which was once forgotten.

Teach yourself to draw the demand that caused your soul to get rotten...

 

Author's Note

This writing is about recollecting past memories, somwhere faded in past life..
And I mean, while writing this I was getting different feelings and emotions and I think so, that's how this write came....!

Ahmm!! Give it a read..I know it's not too bad! lolz.. :D :D

Reviews

I was almost planning to correct a line or two, but when I reviewed it again, the emphasis was definitely put in place very well.

The message emphasized was also written well, it is a poem worth to be read several times, in each time, a new insight emerges.

Good form, good flow, good choice of words, well imparted message.

A very good piece

[Karl]

Wow! what a great way to write a poem

[Together]

I liked the style a lot! Great man!

[Debbie]

have read several of your poems...have enjoyed the way you have found images that fit with your writing

[James K. Blaylock]

Great Acrostic!

jkb

[Erin Phoenix]

This is good. I like layouts like your poem :)

It is a really touching poem.

Made me think of past times.

:)

[Imperfection]

It is very difficult to write an acrostic that rhymes so well as this one does.
You're a very talented person. Keep sending me read requests.

I know that you're open to suggestions. So I will take the liberty of saying something.... I think the opening line could be expressed better.

Other than that, good job.

[Innocent]

The first picture in this is really mind blowing
"Teach yourself to draw the demand that caused your soul to get rotten..."
wow! what a beautiful way to end a much beautiful poetry like this.
You know often acrostics doesn't have a good flow, but this one is really flawless and I really appreciate it's flow the most.
There is a great wisdom in your writing. I loved it!

[Blue Rose]

I agree, often we try so hard to figure out our future that we forget our own past, but remember "past is the key to future". I really loved this Acrostic

[Golden]

Dude! This is great. I felt the power in your words