You

You are so much more all the time.

You are as calm as the night sky,
bestowing your serene warmth in a cold night,
with blemishes of honor and resentment in your body, like stars accompanying the sky.
And when it rains, the thunder you bolt out is your beauty magnified.
And every time I call  out your name,
I want you to know, the universe stands still, to feel the aura your name spreads in. 

Author's Note

I'd be glad to know how you feel on it :)

Reviews

[bhavya]

I am thank ful to each one of you here taking the time to review this poem. Extremely Sorry that I am not being able to reply to your reviews since I am using a phone which doesnt show me the option to reply reviews. But am glad and would love to be reviewd further and also appreciate to make the necessary changes and write better . Thank you.

[Salvatore]

Very nice poem, it leads me to serenity.

[Saddam]

And every time I call out your name,
I want you to know, the universe stands still, to feel the aura your name spreads in.

It is warmth and so beautiful.
I love you use of word.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
beautiful.............
though i agree with Allen...........the length of lines are.........awkward........
very well written.........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Paavana Varma]

The imagery you've used is wonderful! Great poem.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully captured. Your words sing from the page.

[Arunima]

such perfect use of imagery...beautiful...and romantic....nice....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was beautiful and romantic.
Written straight from your heart. I hope if it goes out to anyone in particular, that you have read it to them.
I really enjoyed reading this, was such a sweet piece.
Keep writing, always :)

[Allen Smuckler]

Nice write bbhavya, imagery and use of metaphors was well done as was
your near/slant rhyming. Form and style was free flowing and spirited.
Two minor points...I might not use "sky" twice and the last line was awkward...(I would definitely work on "Spreads in"... maybe as little as dripping "in". Should never end a sentence with a preposition anyway.
Other than that...terrific poem
allen

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of description. You create beautiful place and left the reader with good thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote