RAIN ON ME

I wrote this for my love,cannot stand when she is away:-)

The sky outside is suddenly gray,it seems to be like that,when you are away.Soft words are spoken,in a loving way,and all I want,is for you to stay.

Be in my arms,as you are in my mind,and a love that last forever,you will soon find.

 

As the rain begins to fall,its a symbol to me,that the yearning in my heart,will forever be.A waterfall of love,that flows for you,for you are my angel,a dream come true.  

Author's Note

a little something I wrote for the angel of my heart,so that she knows I care,as we are apart:-)

Reviews

[Succubi]

I love this poem soo much...
you conveyed that even though a person is not around you, you can still feel your love for them
I guess that's a sign that you're feeling true love

excellent piece

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

wow this is beautiful... extremly passionate

[Windy]

Aptly put! My love is away as well, I hope he knows how much I miss him. I'm sure when she reads this she will know how much you care. Think I will go call my man now and tell him, thanks for the "urge"! :)
Windy