STROKE OF LIFE

sun sets as light fades

blackness paints the earths canvas

colors brush new day

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

I like this one. It can truly see what is happening around. Just a little push with the sound maybe. It doesn't have to be in rhyme but I want more rhythm and connection of words. All in all, this is nice. :)

[Reika]

Beautiful.

[closed account]

This is a teriffic Haiku, I can see the sun setting as the earth turns dark, then the sun rising bringing it's color back in the morning!! very clear is this image!! you have out done your self with this one.. I am so anxious to see what the next Haiku is going to be from you,, it's going to be hard to beat this one.. but come on and give it a try!! :0