I VOW

just a little something I might say to the women of my dreams.....hope everyone enjoys:-)

As I stand here beside you,with God as my witness,theres no way in the world,I would ever have missed this.I need you to know,that you make me better,and for the rest of my life,I see you and I together.I promise to be faithful,loving and true,and for that matter,theres nothing in the world I would'nt do,to bring happiness,and show you my love,you are a blessing to me,a beautiful gift from above.

Although I cannot promise a mansion on the hill,I'll give a cabin in the woods,and a new rod-n-reel.Things may get tough and at times they do,but you will never have to wonder how much I love you.We will have fights and disagree,this is for sure,but after all the yelling is done,come to bed my angel I have the cure.I may not be able to give you all you want,but you will have what you need,all the food you can eat,and all the cloths you can wear,and lots of me,for this I swear.

 

As time goes by and our hair turns gray,I will still wake you with a kiss on the nose,to start your day.We will sit out in the swing,as old ones will,and as I look in your eyes,you know how I feel.We will laugh and talk about all the things we been through,and I will never forget this day,that I said I DO.

Reviews

[shinybluestars03]

I agree with everyone
this is such a wonderful poem
very romantic im sure you
will make the women very happy someday.

Thanks for sharing
this beautiful piece.

Best wishes

[Windy]

What a beautiful poem. It's so full of emotion, of love and caring. They would actually make beautiful "vows". I love the last stanza especially "as our hair turns grey..." that is such a sweet sentiment. I'm not surprised though comming from you my friend. I always love reading your poems. Another wonderful write (and read). Congrats Smiles

[Lori]

This is quite lovely. I really love how the format on the page (paragraph form) really tricks the reader, because the poem itself isn't at all prose-y, but very lyrical. Good luck with finding this woman of your dreams.

[T]

This is so beautiful and I hope someday, it will happen for you ... Wonderfully written ... hugs

[SacredRose]

Very romantic :) I hope that some day you will recite this poem to the one you love. I would assume that you will add personal touches to the poem relating to her as well. Either way, it's very nice.