SO FAR AWAY

As I look up to the sky,I think of you

I glare at the moon,and the water so blue

To have you to hold,means the world to me

its as if god sent you to be.

 

I wonder if the same moon that lights my night

shine on your beautiful face,so soft and bright.

I watch the waves crash on the shore

and I want to send them to you

so you can send them once more.

 

You are the love of my life,and that means alot

for in my heart you have carved a spot.

I think if the same wind,that blows in this place

reaches to you,and kisses your face.

 

I long to hold you in my arms someday

but as for now

your so far away.

 

 

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is a very beautiful write and touching....Kim

[Lori]

Lovely. The wistfulness really comes through and it's very touching.

[poetforlife]

Stop it!!! Makes me miss feeling that way about a certain someone. Very nice, brother.

[Brianna Brie]

Smooth, flawless flow throughout...not to mention sweet and heartfelt. Really love this poem.

[T]

You have a way with words that expresses your feelings so beautifully. I felt the longing so strongly in this poem and I hope it won't be long for you and your love to be together. I have felt the same and wondered the same of my someone special and can definitely relate ... Beautifully penned ... hugs