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"Love is not love, which alters when it alteration finds."

It's never enough, as I never cease to want of wanting more,

It's an ache that comes from the vulnerable need to be loved, loved in entirety for the heart,

It's a thought, that leads to the sweet, slick crystal dribble that rolls from the eyes,

It's a wonder that even as clocks chime, birds sing, flowers bloom and grow, that I never cease to want of wanting more,

It's the world at night, when the darkness brings with it the luminous promise of the day,

It's the laughter in life, that I feel so fully as I watch you live through your sweet laughter,

It's the happiness that comes from the knowledge that we are who we are with no need for alterations,

It's the wonder, that even as clocks tick, birds crow, flowers blossom and flourish, that I never cease to want of wanting more, of you.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very beautiful piece...I love the unique way you express your deep hunger of love, wanting more is not something we can control in love..as we strive for eternity of soul and heart (I mean - women). I`m impressed from the free and empty of thoughts way you need to love, shows a courage and optimism!
Your words and descriptions reveal a poetic soul and much gentleness...
It's the wonder, that even as clocks tick, birds crow, flowers blossom and flourish, that I never cease to want of wanting more, of you.
The world is always the same and never the same, when I love you and my love never will fade with the time, as you painted in lovely way...

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September-013

[Traci]

Nicely penned Nic, each line holds deep meaning with wonderful imagery. I as well like how you began every line with the same word, and the last line brought everything full circle. Well done, Nic.

[Tamlin]

Oh. Err. This is a late review. Oh well. :3
I really like how you begin every line with the same word, and every line is true to the main theme of the poem. I especially like the last line. Well done.

[Nic Murray]

haha no i love getting feedback no matter the time I find it really helpful! thank you so much for writing it ^-^

[Rahul]

IInd stanza started with some deep meanings and this piece is nice and beautifully penned. loved your imaginary here.
every line is nice and having great impression on others reading this piece.

[Nic Murray]

this is such a great review thank you so much for it you have been very kind and helpful too!

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poem is very nice. with love. with hunger beautiful.
wanting help to feel alive. is often very good to want.
is good poem too :-)

[Nic Murray]

thank you so much, the feedback was wonderful to read and really does motivate me to keep writing!! :D