Standing side by side

love pome

Standing side by side. Embraced Illusion of strength
and fullish pride. Once was blind but now they see.
Smiple plan together they must all be. Unspoken Promis
in trust and faith ,they place there lifes in one anothers hands.
Sitting there watching the hourly sands. Analyzing there thoughts
Letting there actions be clear. Shadows of there past is
what they fear.
Unexpected emotions of desier. Atractions of two souls
set on fire. Challanged by distractions, confusion, lies, and
deceat. Insacurtys there both determind to defeat . Standing side
by side. Embraced illusion of strength and fullish pride.

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

(Quick thing: u put love pome as the description and it's poem)

Otherwise, you did a really good job on this. I like it a lot and you should keep writing, you have a unique set of writing skills even though it's really short. Good job, yet again ;)

Check my writing, please and thank you! -fallen_sueanne