The F*cked-Up Marriage (And What To Do About It

• "My work belongs alongside top marriage counseling books,"

Seriously? A bit in love with yourself, I see.

But, were you a fraction of what you declare yourself to be would you be spamming a writer’s forum? Naaa.

So, I want to look at the book.

The first thing that hit me was that it’s self-released. One would think that a book that “belongs alongside top marriage counseling books,” would released by a real publisher.”

Next: Since the original publication, last year, there has been only one comment, and that came from a colleague, a "Physician, Psychiatrist and Personal Coach."

And finally, was that contrived and poorly thought-out “story” of the dog and wolf:

1. It’s obviously contrived, with each of the two reciting the lines you place in their mouth, which takes all impact from it. Neither character behaves in either the way that animal does, or, in a way that makes sense.

2. The wolf is so dumb that it never notices that the dog is chained. It waits till it’s pointed out, and then reacts as it’s programmed to. And where the story is going is so obvious from the beginning that it serves no purpose.

3. The dog claims that it’s fed twice a day, but then points out a “trough” that’s filled with food, and gives the wolf permission to eat. Obviously, you’ve had little experience with either wolves or dogs, because damn few would either give away food nor leave food in their bowl between meals. And no wolf would ask for permission to eat. And of course, troughs are long, shallow receptacles for drinking water or feed for farm animals.

But in the end? You invaded a writer’s site, labeled your spam a story, and tried to trick the people here into looking at your spam, instead of actually advertising your offering where people would be seeking such a book.

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