regret and sorrow

its a quickly written poem with much meaning and emotion

stupid ideas
dont think straight, i wonder what will happen, but ignore the answer.
i do it. go on. someone discovers. i regret. sorrow comes, and spends the night, im regretful.

Reviews

[Paper-Pen-Princess]

Sorrow comes and spends the night!
Taht is truely poetic my dear. You are a verry talented young girl and you should be proud. I had a rough child hood too. check out my "6 feet deep" and "uncle sam"
I think you'd like it:)

[littlewhitebird]

Sounds good so far. I really like the beginning with 'stupid ideas' and 'ignoring the answer'. I think it'd sound better if you went into more detail about what those stupid idea's are.