Ribbons of Color

At the beginning of love...

Ribbons of color radiate all over me
When I dream of us together
Making a life of passionate love,
Sharing a world of adventure.

I see us inside each other,
Hearts aflame, souls merging,
And I will never look back
Our future will be dazzling.

Ribbons of color radiate all over me
As I simply enjoy the dream of you,
Rejoicing having you near me.
This dream will someday come true.
 
I only know that the whole world
Begins to tumble up and around,
Whenever I think about losing you

And then I hit the ground.

Ribbons of color radiate all over me
Like the brightest star in the sky,
I'll shine brightly, wishing you'd believe
And say that you'll give our love a try.

I can promise to give you all of me,
To love, to play with, and to explore
A sensuous lady and I am all yours.

For you to conquer and adore.
 
Ribbons of color radiate all over me

In your arms I am at home with you
Happy holding you, wanting to believe--
That you love and dream of me too.

 

Reviews

[Catrinka]

Another romantic masterpiece! Your man must love to read this stuff! I can just see the ribbons of color (the font type helps LOL) and I love the 'dream theme'. My favorite paragraph:
I see us inside each other,
Our souls merge,
And I never look back
Or wonder why you're here
Big sigh..so romantic!

[E. M. Murren]

Yes, that is definately love in its infancy. Really beautiful work. I love the way you highlighed "Ribbons of color" as well. Fine work.

[poddar kushal]

wanting to bilieve...indeed the emotional longing is depicted thoroughly

[Candle in the wind]

This is so radiant with the beauty of love!Don't we all want to believe this dream but some are interrupted by harsh reality.

[Lorraine Pearson]

There is a sweetness in all thats expressed here. All I kept thinking throughout the read was, "oh God, I've been in this place... I sure hope who she's feeling this for, feels it right back for her...she is loving so intensely." Anyway, to love in itself is to celebrate life, to be loved in return is doubly bright! :D
~Lorraiyne

[Simmering embers]

This poem shimmers with happiness :-) It is so honest and happy!

[Isaiah Jay]

Very pretty.

[Sqeaver]

I love the change. Great write.

[Rain]

Girl, you got it bad. :) If that's not love, there is no love. Wanting to be inside the other person. I remember that feeling...all consumming. This piece is filled with the anticipation of lasting love. The color change adds to it. I read this, and it makes me happy for you, or for anyone who has those feelings. Great. Rain..

[Sqeaver]

Very beautiful poem. Great write.

[forfila]

Oh Brenda, a beautiful love poem,,, I do like it, in fact I adore it =)

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