To Eternity

Over the rainbow

Riding the snowy white clouds

To eternity

 

 

Author's Note

As I sat on my porch watching a rainbow and the snowy white clouds moving away, this thought came to me.

Reviews

[Melissa]

Another journey that I would love to travel! Wonderful Haiku. Thanks for entering the contest. I will notify winners when the contest ends.

[James K. Blaylock]

I really loved this piece, and I'm adding it to my favz!

jkb

[Michael X]

bren, i don't know the specific structure rules for haiku, this is written beautifully and captures the vision in essence to the meaning as well as set the readers heart adrift, its a lovely, peaceful vision, meditative and soft, i could easily envision the clouds as if i was floating in a dreamful landscape, felt as if i was sitting in that chair, pondering the height's of heaven, portrait imagery, beautifully projected, to know what its like to glimpse eternity, lovely writing.

[Kathleen Marie]

Lovely Haiku! There is nothing more impressive than the sky above!

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Very nice Haiku. Spur of the moment inspiration always seems to be the best writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

[Blackbirdsong]

Well done, beautifully penned.

[Sqeaver]

Very good.

[Isaiah Jay]

I like rainbows...

[rash]

In 2001 after the Al Quaeda attack I saw a ship in the clouds. It was nice. Kids dream in clouds and watch their inherent memories play out before them in the sky. Their imaginations are the leaves of their family tree.

[E. M. Murren]

Simple works always leave us with so much to think about. Thank you for this. It is lovely.