The HEART, The FEELINGS and A POEM

A little poem that I wrote very early morning in Chennai. One of my very first English Poems :)

The HEART, The FEELINGS and A POEM

Something throbbed in a place in the body...
It is called the HEART!

Something poured out from that place...
It is called the FEELINGS!

Something took shape on pAPER, with pEN...
It is called a POEM!

Nayan
2:25 AM (very early morning)
Sunday, 11th Mar' 07
Chennai, India

Reviews

[Ramya]

For a first poem, this is good. Add to it writing this very early in the morn. I appreciate that you penned down your thoughts at that time!!

[Cassandra D.]

This was short, simple, yet fascinating.
It truly makes a reader thinks twice.

[Huggy Bear]

Very good piece of writing especially since it is one of your first English poem. Keep up the great work

[mystic soul]

Quite good! this one being your first poem must be very close to your heart... Nice poem!!