Mountains

I've moved mountains for you...

But i'm tired now,

Sick of running in place...

Besides i'm almost out of mountains,

and i have yet to hold your stare

Reviews

[Une coccinelle]

I like this...I'm wondering if there is another ending that might rhyme with place. Face, embrace... just a thought

[bjornne]

"and i have yet to taste your embrace" just my initial thought, there is a few i have to come back and revise, i appreciate the feedback! =)

[Une coccinelle]

Ooo I like that! Yep...keep writing!

[FateDictates]

loving your work..curtsy bow

[Neo]

It sucks when you do so much for someone and they don't even seem to notice or care.
Thanks for sharing.

[bjornne]

Yeah, I agree (obviously), I still like to think that crossing oceans for someone , if you truly like them is worth it. your heart will either reforged or satisfied. Thanks for taking the time to read a few of my lines! i really appreciate!