I'm Yours

From day one, I've been yours

I feel for you, i ache for you

When you leave I wait impatiently for your return

There is no real diversion from you

My mind always returns to you

My heart and soul belong to you

I love you through all the storms

the trials and tribulations

when i wake, it's your smile that kickstarts my day

It's your laugh that gives me inspiration

It's your heart that draws me to you

Your eyes, the windows to the soul

mesmerize me

Your touch sets my body on fire

your voice soothes my soul

i promised you my body, mind, heart and soul

the night i got down on one knee

and proposed the union of we two lost souls

forevermore, until eternity

I'm yours

Reviews

[futurepast.]

It is an intense write where we can depict the love you have for that person. We can clearly see that she is the center of the universe for you, and you live only for her. Many people can relate to this piece because that's really how we all feel towards the person we love. Even in bad times, we know we will never let go of that person, because we love them so much .. and I think you painted that picture very well in the first two lines (which I loved very much):
"From day one, I've been yours
I feel for you, i ache for you"
Very well expressed, and written.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is really beautiful and very romantic.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Bravo! Great romance going on in this well written poem!

[Deviant Works]

Wonderful, Drako. An everlasting promise sealed with a heart completely devoted, completely loyal, completely in love. This just flows with tenderness, need, longing and joy. You have a soul like mine.:) You deserve nothing but the best and the best you shall have.

[FallenHeroXx]

So friggin good i still love it'. I can so relate to your writing my friend. I am lost in all of your reading, in a good way :)