Infected

Infected

Every minute of

everyday.

Thoughts of you

slow me down

make it hard to see

anything else.

Trust me,

I've tried.

Why do you do this to me?

What makes you so

special?

I see you

watching me

when I pass by.

I wish you that you would just say

Hi.

I don't think you ever have,

for all the times that we've talked.

See! 

Even now, your love

it's a virus

you just don't know it yet.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Understanding the over all theme, the word play and flow is nice and cool.

[♋ Iris ♋]

Awesome very enjoyable to read and understandable. Good write. Keep it up~!

[Bridger Hall]

clever. i like how you described that thinking about the person slows you down. hidden message is cool. nice work.

[Zachary_James]

BLOWN AWAY this was amazing.

[Stella]

I love this poem because I can totally relate to it. Great job!

[.Lost Soul.]

Okay, so i was reading submissions to my poetry contest and came across this piece and was blown away by the great talent you had. Beautifully written. Legit the best poem in the whole contest :) Amazing
-Emmy

[Tim Lion]

poem in a poem. well done.
touching in the least mushy sort of way.

[Adam :P]

wow good job! very inteesting. you got a talent!

[Felecia]

It was very interesing. I liked it alot. Nice poem.

[paradise]

Damn this is good really caught my attention was very interesting nice job :)