My love

Written poem for my love.

You said no sweet words at all

though, you made me fall.

'Cos in the cold wind of winter

you made me feel like it's summer.


Inside of me

is a voiceless feelings,

trying to shout out loud..

that "you are my love."

Author's Note

Free for feedbacks and thoughts. :)

Reviews

[lua]

the third and fourth lines of the first verse are so simply beautiful and those alone speak for the intense love portrayed in this piece

[Adam Adams]

seemed more like a very flavory tribute you giving to your lover who might've oft. kept your so wrapped up in his arms, & of course, 'neath the ply of rose-petals. quite intriguing. nicely done, though.