UNTITLED

PLEASE DONT LAUGHT ITS STUPID

UNTITLED

 

WHEN THE SUN WENT DOWN

THE MOON CAME OUT

THE STARS WERE BRIGHT

HOW GREAT THOU ART

EVERYTHING CAME TO LIFE

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL SIGHT

THE PRAIE CAME TO

SHINE SO BRIGHT

AND IT ILLUMINATED

A FIGHT BIGGER THEN A HOUSE

AND OUT CAME A MOUSE

 

Author's Note

IGNORE ANY GRAMMER

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

It started off very well but just at the end it seemed to get a bit lost and I felt that the last line was added just because it rhymed with house, perhaps you could look at it again and just redo the last few lines.... it has potential.