Panic

Wasn't sure what this was, but as I went over it a few times, I realized it's how I feel when I have an panic attack.

Inside my mind my demons creep and crawl. 

Angels kiss me from the sun,

but I sit in agony while demons have fun.  

Crouched in the corner of a room, feeling it rise I seek my doom. 

I reach for his throat and stare him in the eye

Lucifer’s kiss came one last time, 

and falling in love with him was no crime. 

But here in hell I find my solace, happiness and harmony,

understand me while I say it’s true,

I love death, but I love you. 

These crystal waters kiss my feet, 

and I dance in place, 

twirling my arms about,

take my word I’ve admitted defeat,

gasping for air as I try to shout. 

Immerse my sins and I’ll be forgotten, 

just one more thing I have to tend to. 

I kiss my hideous creatures goodbye, 

back to reality, one breathe at a time,

I watch my demons die.  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I kiss my hideous creatures goodbye,
back to reality, one breathe at a time,
I watch my demons die.

I really like this part, this is very well written....

[AaronFreitas]

"Crouched in the corner of a room, feeling it rise I seek my doom.
I reach for his throat and stare him in the eye
Lucifer’s kiss came one last time,
and falling in love with him was no crime. "
I loved those lines. Such a dark yet well thought out write. I love your style... great write :)

[Danny Dilane]

Really liked the tone of this poem. Got a little lost towards the end but isn't that the point of poetry? Great job!

[Moth Phoenix]

Thank you (: