Manipulator

Yeah.... =/

Forever a tattoo in my life,

one I sadly cannot escape.

Your hands drenched in blood,

from this horrible murder you committed. 

You plead with pseudo innocence,

I push that you're the guilty one.

Don't try and deceive us all,

I'm the victim here.

Manipulator…

Liar…

You are forever a tattoo in my life,

one I can't escape. 

I try and I try to wake up

and wake up,

but you're still there. 

The leaves are turning and it's becoming cold,

you are something that will never die. 

Author's Note

Thoughts???

Reviews

[Hippy]

i think this is one of your better poems, i like how you say i instead of the girl, i feel it has more emotion then, i think the repetition of wake up isn't necessary and hurts the flow, maybe if you put a comma between them it'd help and even drop the second one down a line