The silent suffering

A tear running down your face

You explain your pain

Day after day you’ve suffered

Every hour you’ve never said a word

Your voice unheard

Now you have the confidence

That you once lost

Separated from the world you once belonged to

All you need is a sense of security

 

Reviews

[Mica]

You have a very unique writing style (which is amazing!)
In only 9 lines you managed to touch on so much that is usually ignored in regards to silent suffering. Like losing confidence, needing a sense of security and having a voice unheard.
Overall, I really like this... a lot :)