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Re-embodiment  

A reincarnation 

Me an this body went 

To cretin damnation

So much time wasted liven in this god damn nation

Put a pen in my cell

Catch me day to day pacing 

From the fires of Hell 

I dare you to test my creation 

Reviews

[silent poet]

When I read this, first thought was MUSIC! I am a lyricist but also a poet. I started writing young and went to music , you? definitely sound like you NEED to jump into music.. just my thoughts. love your wordplay

[BLitZeD]

yes exactly, music, a poem is just a rap without the beat lol. i usually write to instrumentals, if not i got a beat in my head, im gana send u a read request to to others i wrote n see what u think. but ya i been writing since i was young also, just undercover, only a few people know i write, its just what i do when i feel some type of way about something. coming on here is the first time i put my stuff out there, just curious of what people think.

[silent poet]

Do you ever record or have recorded before? you should I would definitely be interested in listening. Also please do I do not mind, would give you feedback on all you've written.
I have done music mostly. my stuff is on reverbnation and sound cloud but I have a track on my page on here called lyrical poetry, you should check it out... I think it's a great gift when one can just spill with words and you definitely have that. the few people who know you write? should feel special. Put your stuff out there whenever you can because you will only excel .. If you're ever interested in doing music let me know

[BLitZeD]

lol no just f****n around on my phone.

[silent poet]

lol all good. all start some where. :) I think you should definitely consider it..

[BLitZeD]

didnt see the rest of that comment sorry, i just listened to the video on ur page, pretty raw loved it, thats exactly what i do, i just havent recorded it lol. n thanks for the words of confidence

[silent poet]

thank you as well. And you're welcome just being real. Think about what i said tho, seriously It's easier than you think to start on your music recording wise.. If you ever need a hand let me know